There's a company in middle east which is interested in me. I refused a job proposal from them 7 months ago and now I decided to join them and they made me a better offer but still low for such a big change.
I am not a very "social" guy so, I don't know how to write it in a "less rude mode". That's why I'm asking here for help.
Is this a professional and not rude phrasing? Is there something that could be changed or added, in case it weren't?
I would like to express my gratitude for your email and the offer. I am convinced that my 6+ years of experience in different areas of the digital field (design and verification) and my hability to solve complex problems will be a great asset for XXX. The position in question is of great interest to me, but I was expecting a higher salary. I am seeking a salary between XXX and XXX. I believe this in in line with all my knowledge and skills. The benefits related to the children (XXX for education+flights) are not applicable to me since I don't have children.
Once again, thank you for your offer.