Not Sure if this is the correct area to post this, if not please let me know and I will re-direct it.
I'm 21 and i'm a "Junior System Administrator" for a Post Production Company, I never knew how important LinkedIn was until I saw how many people we employed through it, I want to tailor my current job role description to the best of my ability but I'm struggling, I don't know what to include and what to leave out, what is too much/little, currently it's in CV form aka bullet points, which I've heard is a massive mistake to do.
Edit: I was pursuing a Degree in computer Science but dropped out after 1 year to pursue work in another IT company, so I need things like this to strengthen my worth I guess.
Here is a brief overview of what I do at the moment, any help is appreciated!
I maintain and manage our Windows Server, creating & deleting users when needed, creating group policies for departments and managing users permissions, I manage our License Servers,these servers host all of the licenses for the software we use, I install and update all necessary components when needed, the network i manage comprises of 60+ computers that I deploy software/general updates on and troubleshoot/solve any problems that may arise.
I manage a GPU render farm (50 GPUS spread across multiple boxes) that we use to render projects with, I wrote scripts/setup our farm so that it auto logs in, opens all required programs and maps all network drives automatically even after a crash/reboot.
I'm currently planning a company wide OS move to Linux(Currently running windows) this involves changing setting up a Domain Controller, Web Server, DHCP/DNS Server, re-mapping the Entire network and Automation of software deployment and updates.
So my question is, how do I make all of that look nice/tailored, as if it were to roll of the tongue essentially, descriptions and describing myself/things I do are not my strong point at all.