I have been asked to complete a document by my direct manager, written by him. Ignoring the english quality itself and focusing on the technical aspect, it's rough ... It's too general with some technical words randomly thrown. Most don't give any useful information to the reader.
I believe this document is intended to be sent to potential customers and am afraid it will simply make them run away or think bad of the company.
I know my task is only to complete it, but doing so without mentioning the rest makes me feel I approve of the rest. This is also possible he asked me to complete it to receive feedback, indirectly.
I'm first going to complete it, but I don't know how to approach him.