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I am a coop student, and I worked my first co-op placement at company X.

I performed really well, and the manager said "just let me know if you ever want to come back". We have even discussed me working full time after graduation.

I will be seeking for my next coop term in the winter, and I would like to apply for company X again.

I know that I should notify my manager that I have done this, because chances are that he will hire me if I do so.

I don't know what exactly to message him though.

Here is what I have:

Dear John Doe,

It was a pleasure working for company X, and I would like to do it once again. I have submitted a job application for this position at X, and just thought I'd let you know about this.

Hope we can work together again soon.

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  • So the old boss doesn't have a position, and you'll be back at the same company in a different position and expect at some point to run into him/her?
    – J. Chris Compton
    Commented Dec 11, 2018 at 14:50
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    Sounds great to me!
    – Daniel
    Commented Dec 11, 2018 at 15:00

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Dear John Doe,
It was a pleasure working for company X, and I would like to do it once again.

"Dear John Doe,
"It was a pleasure working with you at company X, and I would like to do it once again."

I have submitted a job application for this position at X, and just thought I'd let you know about this.

I have submitted an application to return to X for the Winter term; wanted to make sure you knew.

Hope we can work together again soon.

Hope we can work together again soon. (no suggestions)

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